I'm not too sure if what I submitted for consideration is exactly up to standard. I tend to look at my poetry and be horribly self-conscious about it, especially when I've never written in that particular style before... hopefully they weren't too tragic this time around though. I decided to try a couple of different ideas - namely with or without a plot. Current pieces that were offered:
(Sappho Risen)
When memory encased you
in the hot silence of a tomb,
still you would not sleep.
Alexandria loved you once:
Fond words, gentle songs
filled your summer island, and beyond.
When your temple crumbled
to ash, arthritic and bone-weary, you
were struck dumb, banished
to suffocating dark.
You lay –
under sand
under coffin
under linen
under skin –
For thousands of years.
Mouthpiece lost,
You moved in silent dismay
From the mouths and hearts of scholars, to
The desiccated chest of a kitchen hand, a gardener, a housecat.
Those lonely spaces drew you,
Pieces, fragments of
Love lost, love kindled.
You remained, the pulse beneath
A dry chest: impossible, relentless,
patient. Dreaming of the sun,
Until, finally, bloated with years, you were
expunged from the sands;
not living, but never dead.
A sorry sight, of course –
You wreck of ancient eloquence -
but though your
quiet hosts lay forgotten,
you were cradled in the most tender of hands:
wounded by graveworm hunger,
you limp among us again.
The other poem is more wandering in focus, rather than an homage to the focus of my thesis. I kind of like how it turned out, even if in terms of plot it's fairly pedestrian:
(Only the beginning)
You sad, wet thing. Knock-kneed disintegration.
Your animal-drive scramble for half-life
does not frighten me,
Death’s starving posterchild!
Thick chunks of putrid meat
– your rot and ruin –
hit the floor with fat splats:
sombre and somehow ridiculous.
Nothing excessive is carried.
Where fantastical epigrams have spoken
of morbid, eternal beauties, curtaining
Porcelain skin with
Hair and wings and tongue and teeth
Of a glorious, hulking beast:
Romantic carnivore, ethereal predator.
yours is the true shapeshift, all
smoke and blood and madness.
Humanity decanted, you are real in your
grotesque glory -
Life and death in one.
Meat turns to food turns to life turns to meat.
Rabid beast turns on its maker,
but I am not Frankenstein to shy from my child.
These are incredible, I couldn't get anything together for the Cordite Zombie edition.
ReplyDeleteI just read 'Beloved' on the Kipple site, and had to let you know that I was left awe struck.
Thank you very much! It's great to hear from you. Kipple was the first time I tried posting a poem online, so I'm really glad that you liked it. Hopefully Cordite will be half as positive!
ReplyDeleteI'm with Mark, Shonni! Especially like the wildness of the second piece. That first line is great 'you sad, wet thing'
ReplyDeleteAnd 'graveworm hunger' is superb too!